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September 13, 2004

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Nhat Pham

I'm impressed with the author's clarity and ability to seeminglessly sift through sentences so easily. The author sums up all three stories without ever losing the thesis or flow of the post. The ending was great, the whole time the author was focused on the stories and avoided generalizing too much about culture or aspects of history.
I like this part of the post: "During the seventeenth century, the Dutch inhabited the land of New Netherlands and built a trade network with the Iroquois Confederacy; thus started the change in Native American culture."
Minor weak points are that the thesis should be underlined and paragraphs better spaced. Good work.

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